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All I Want

by MCR-99 2 Reviews

{Oneshot Based Off True Events} Sadie is tired of not being accepted for who she really is, so she decides to show the world who she is and who she never wants to be.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2013/05/18 - Updated: 2013/05/18 - 1061 words

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  • All I Want

    (#) CrimsonRevenge 2013-05-18 08:09:02 PM

    Good for you!! You don't have to be what others want you to be. Be true to yourself!!
  • All I Want

    (#) RhiannonLeighBlack 2013-05-19 09:44:22 AM

    LOADS of improvement Miss Sadie! I love your one shot, and I love the premise of the story. The grammar is on point, the tone is formal, you rocked it! Very, very proud of you. The only advice I have is to name the girl something else, even if its about you. If you ever hit it big as an author, especially if your work is made into a movie? You'll really want your privacy to be intact. Other than that, PERFECTION. Rating you up!

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