Categories > Original > Drama
(#) RhiannonLeighBlack 2013-05-19LOADS of improvement Miss Sadie! I love your one shot, and I love the premise of the story. The grammar is on point, the tone is formal, you rocked it! Very, very proud of you. The only advice I have is to name the girl something else, even if its about you. If you ever hit it big as an author, especially if your work is made into a movie? You'll really want your privacy to be intact. Other than that, PERFECTION. Rating you up!
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