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if you click "don't save",

by upinflames 3 Reviews

drew an octopus and made it target practice

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/05/21 - Updated: 2013/05/21 - 342 words - Complete

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  • if you click "don't save",

    (#) beatus_quinn 2013-05-22 01:14:56 AM

    This is kinda fucked up. It's pretty cool.

    I hope you're alright, though.

    Author's response

    it is, isn't it? the fucked up part, not the cool part. yeah, yeah, yeah i'm still keeping the dust off these bones.
    -az
  • if you click "don't save",

    (#) nerds_assemble 2013-05-22 01:58:21 AM

    HEY BULLDOG. YOU CAN TALK TO ME. IF YOU'RE LONELY, YOU CAN TALK TO ME.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8DfB-wqp5g

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vfI0aCCHug

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkzGSMxPFiE

    It's soooooooo much easier to say, "don't let it bother you." but when lightening strikes, man...you have no idea what's been said, yeah?

    Your poems are like little notes that burn in my head...for a very long time...which makes sense considering your username, actually. But. It's the best possible kind of burn and it's one of the things that makes me realize exactly what writing is.

    You don't have to take this (I SO HOPE IT CAME OUT AS ONE BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT IT IS) compliment and if you choose not to, that's fine. But it'll be here as long as I live, dude.

    Keep writing, keep it full.

    Author's response

    i'll try really hard, rah rah.
    -az
  • if you click "don't save",

    (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-05-22 02:56:16 AM

    This is just so wonderful. I find it beautiful and just amazing. Man I don't even know. But this is some amazing stuff right here. I really like how you typed that one sentence backwards and it just stood out to me more and made it so good. I don't even know, but this is really really great.

    Abbie xx

    Author's response

    i'm too convinced of that, but if you are, thank you.
    -az

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