(#) shadowvt125 2013-06-16This morning I got stuck with my work and to keep my idle hands and brain busy I took a little peak at RF again. With a scroll and a quick click my day suddenly got brighter: UPDATE!
While giving it a quick onceover (could not help myself… work had to wait for me now…) my eyes grew wide as saucers. What had I missed? What happened to shy, cutely stumbling over his words, blushing Slash? Suddenly he behaved like a curly haired Rudolph Valentino or more like a JD drunk Pepé le Pew (you remember that Warner Brothers cartoon starring the skunk with the French accent, love drunk chasing after the poor, not fast enough pussycat?).Nice trick! You almost had me! Role playing.
The guys acting like the teenage boys they’re actually are. Their banter is so amusing, the since boyhood relationship so tangible. And I nearly choked laughing on my pick me up coffee when it came to Ratt. (I have nothing against Ratt or Steven Pearcy , not in the least – but ;-).) This light, almost sunny mood soon darkens again with the shadow of an additional member of the little gang: Mr. Brownstone.
Then they are on again, those raging bisexual teenage hormons! Insecurity, indecision, yes, no, maybe… going brain dead in the face of the adored person. Touching and entertaining. Cunning Cupido Steven. Priceless.
I never considered Duff as especially beautiful or sexy. This might change – the way you paint him (scandalously long, powerful legs, linear neck, broad chin, honey almond eyes…starts drooling). In the rough outline he reminds me too a big graceful, powerful jungle cat no more elegant … a bleach blonde Cheetah … that’s it!
And for the whole day I felt the mysterious urge for listening to Rocket Queen (…pounding and sexual….that was hot, hot hot).
Once more – great chapter! Once more so much more to mention! The ropes are pulling stronger, the treads are woven tighter. Brilliant mix of fiction, historical details and last but not least your fabulous writing. It was delicious, thank you!
My favorite part was the little silver trinket once more…
Author's responseHope you still got your work done ;) I love that you got a kick out of my Ratt joke. I actually love their guitarist Warren and have no problem with Stephen, but I felt like it would a joke they would make. I make a lot of jokes about other bands in my fics, but never mean them meanly.
You probably picked up on this, since you noticed the silver trinket (which made me grin really, really big!:D), but that's not Duff's you know. ;) Can't wait to convince you that Duff is sexy and beautiful, lol. I kind of think he is. blushes
Thank you so much for your feedback and paying so much attention to my details. I truly love hearing from you!
- When I first read the small teaser my reaction was like: what the fuck have I missed?!
Then... aha, rolleplaying. Briliant!
I have longed for a update on this, so it was very nice to see a update. :)(I also long for challange, but dont rush.)
Author's responseHehe, I do like to be a bit devious, but I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the little twist :) Thanks for the feedback, I love hearing from you. And Challenge should be updated soon. I've been sitting on the next chapter for a bit. :3
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