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Fading.

by MCR-99 4 Reviews

How stubborn are those scars when they won't fade away?

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2013/07/03 - Updated: 2013/07/03 - 415 words

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  • Fading.

    (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03 03:45:41 PM

    Fuck. See that? That is the sound of a Claire with no other fucking words to say than 'fuck'. That.. that was fucking amazing. This is the quality of work I expect from someone as blatantly fucking bright as you. You're a smart girl.

    I would also like to announce I am almost 2 months clean, and will hopefully continue to work on that. I draw a lot, now. Mostly eyes, and closed eyes, and sometimes Dave Strider. But drawing nonetheless.

    A+, Ms. Hobbs. Truly, truly fucking brilliant.

    Keep the faith,
    xoclaire
  • Fading.

    (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03 03:51:14 PM

    And I have pretty tough standards - this is definitely something.
  • Fading.

    (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03 04:45:49 PM

    The only thing I could think of changing is where you've said 'it will be triggering', maybe change that to 'may be triggering'? Like, it just sounds better, ya dig?
  • Fading.

    (#) Poppana 2013-07-03 05:03:10 PM

    This is really well written, and absolutely beautiful in an extremely morbid way. Makes me a little bit worried about you, to be completely honest.
    Anyway, this is a brilliant piece, keep doing what you're doing.

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