- Another awesome chapter. I'm really loving the commentary from Remus and Sirius. If possible, could you at least add in a bit more comments from Neville? And the others too. I sometimes forget who's all in the room during the readings, since I hardly read anything about them unless they're mentioned in the book at the time of the reading. Otherwise, great so far. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
(#) Kibanamikaze 2014-07-26Update this story please I can't wait for when you make it to goblet of fire since your series amount be taken down like at fanfiction .com like that really good one with harry writing everything in a black book and umbrige cursing him with voodoo or something it was full of mature stuff like abuse and other stuff but I forgot the name but you can continue these great stories please.
- I'm kinda leery of MSTs or insertions, but this is actually rather good. I'm kind of amazed that Umbridge has stayed as quiet as she has, and I have a slight problem with how Black was introduced to Fudge. The Minister promised not to jump to conclusions until the book was read, yes, but he's convinced Dumbledore's conspiring against him, and Black showed up without warning. A few more lines would have been useful there, methinks.
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