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The Lemon Games
(#) MikeJV37 2013-07-19
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!! That was totally, freaking AWESOME!!!! Loved the perks, the skills, the character interactions.. just, everything! I wish I could think straight at the moment so I could ask/comment on things, but I can't... it was that good. I'm stunned... which for me is rare.The Lemon Games
(#) Ashly0601 2013-07-19
I'm not sure if you were dropping a hint about Naruto getting with a female sage of six paths, gotta say though it'll be a first for me reading it.
Just a quick question about Naruto's Will of Fire armour, is it a continuation of his Smouldering Rage mutation? Does that mutation affect the heat of his armour or what? I do like the armour. It gives me an idea of Yamamoto's bankai. If Naruto can do half of the stuff Yamamoto could do with his bankai the Akatsuki is screwed.Author's response
To be honest, the idea of Naruto getting with a Female Sage of Six Paths is... an entertaining one. If I can somehow, viably make it work, I will. But I won't go out of my way for it so don't get your hopes up.
As for the Will of Fire armor... well I guess we'll see. I haven't quite decided what I want to do with it yet.The Lemon Games
(#) breakthrough 2013-07-19
This story is freakin' awesome with how you've taken the oft-cheesy videogame approach to the Narutoverse. I was pleasantly surprised by the depth and thought you've obviously put into it.
I do have a couple questions though. As a personal sucker for Tayuya and FemHaku, I was wondering if these two would make it into the Harem. You did mention at the beginning of the story that certain individuals would be revived for the sake of the game, so I'm just curious who you're going to pull out next.
On that note, how big do you plan on making this harem anyway? The anime is rife with filler girls, and it's always nice to see authors take these characters and turn them into something unique.
Finally, with all the powerups and perks Naruto's been getting, is your version of say Madara or Obito getting appropriately scaled so that Naruto doesn't curbstomp the both of them? Or is there an even bigger baddie, like the creator of the game itself??
Thanks for your time, and thanks for such speedy updates!! Hope your creative energy keeps this steady pace til this thing is completed!Author's response
Tayuya is essentially in the harem just by living with Naruto. I do plan another scene with her later one. As for a female Haku, I'll tell you the same thing I have told others who asked about it. I'll work it in if I can, but don't hold your breath.
This is a sexual based parody story, no matter the depth or thought I have placed into it. I admit, I like to think that The Lemon Games is a little better than others due to a few deciding factors such as the fact I try to have some semblance of a plot. That being said, the harem's limit is not set in stone. Will some girls make a bigger appearance or impact on Naruto? Absolutely but that's because every author has their favorite characters or gets excited about an idea. Such as the Fuu and Nanabi chapter, I posted that less than two days after I posted the Kagero, Sasame, and Kotohime chapter which took me over a week to finish.
In regards to the enemies, I haven't figured out if I will scale them somewhat appropriately, I like Naruto being a badass so he will likely still end up curb stomping both of them after some chapter long epic battle, but I will say this much. Naruto WILL NOT face the creator of the game, I repeat WILL NOT. Naruto WILL however eventually come in contact with the game's creator.The Lemon Games
(#) Ashly0601 2013-07-19
Sorry about this, but quick clarification. With the True Mokuton and True Eternal Mangekyo, how Naruto has to beat Tenzo and Itachi. It says using Mokuton or Sharingan techniques. So to unlock the true eternal will he have to out genjutsu Itachi or something?. And could he possibly play like extreme mokuton tag with Tenzo? Or like extreme mokuton hide and seek? They could both probably hide in trees.
But yea what I'm really after is just clarification of what "using mokuton skills" or "sharingan skills" entails please.Author's response
Right now, for those two perks, I have the bare bones requirements set out and in view for everyone to see. I have not decided exactly how the abilities will be used to gain the particular perks. But it definitely won't be some form of extreme Mokuton tag. I'll figure something out when it comes, but as of right now it's not here yet.The Lemon Games
(#) Xlightningz 2013-07-19
I really enjoyed this chapter and the last one. You're a great writer and it makes my day whenever I see an update here.The Lemon Games
(#) Thanathos 2013-07-20
And another quick chapter, great. Not too much to say right now, I like what happened, and right now I'm too tired to go nitpicking through this chapter. So all I say is that I liked it, that you still haven't corrected Moukton to Mokuton in the Perk-list, and that sex with Fuu gave Naruto +15 points for Trap-Making, but you didn't list Trap-Making under Naruto's skills.
Otherwise a very nice work, hope to see more of it soon.Author's response
To be fair, I've had Naruto gain other skills that I haven't listed yet such as Politics.The Lemon Games
(#) JudgeMidners 2013-07-20
Haven't reviewed any of the previous chapters but thought I'd do it now :)
I like it, it's plot and smut in one. Most people who do game versions take it way out of control and have little to no imagination so kudos to you for this.
I would however consider making a separate page for stats instead of adding it at the end of each chapter, if you keep going like this the stat part of a chapter is gonna get longer than the actual chapters after a while :)
Either way, great fic and keep it up!
//Sey
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