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• Tester

  (#) Poppana 2013-07-27

  Really interesting beginning. For a second there I was confused because I was no longer sure that "I" is a female and what the hell was going on and what the hell is a lathe anyway, but I figured it out :D Oh, I'm still a bit confused by some things, is it like an engineering competition of some sort? I don't know, I wish it would have been explained a little bit better, but hey, maybe I'm just stupid :D
  
  Does "I" have a name anyway? I don't believe it's been mentioned in these three pieces I've read, has it? Also I'm a bit curious about the age?
  
  I do want to ask you something, and I totally understand if you say no and I won't hunt you down and murder you anything, but if you are sure you will never ever EVER post the whole story here, is there like any chance in hell that I could still read it?
  
  Anywho, this is a very good beginning, I thought. When Hayden was mentioned and "I" was checking him out I was like 'ooh gurl u gon tap dat one dat just u wait'. But yes, I hope I get to read more some day, because I really want to know how their relationship gets from this to where they were in the first part :D

  Author's response

  Yeah, it kinda does get confusing since you don't have all the other parts. "I" is female, and in the next part you will learn her name. This is a different competition. One for machining and one for welding. But no everyone knows about these things.
  
  I will put the entire thing up. I just need to get it organized and written first. So, you will read it all.
  
  -Andrea
  
  PS. You're the only one who reviews, and I love you for that :) Keep it up and I'll keep writing.

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