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  (#) Queenessofmyworld 2006-08-10

  Omg i love this story!!! but there is one spelling mistake...its around when he finds batman and confronts him again (the second time) and it said "so nobody would seed him" not seen so ya um ILOVEIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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  (#) DeepS8ter23 2006-08-10

  I love your stories, I wish Batman and Superman could meet!

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  (#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-21

  I liked it!

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  (#) MarkPoa 2007-01-23

  It works if I don't think about the Bruce Wayne here as any way similar to the Bruce Wayne in Batman Begins, the comics, the animated series, and even "The Batman". Because when he gave his name as Bruce Wayne and agreed to stay with Clark, out-of-character alarm bells start to ring in my head. I'm also wondering why Clark would invite Bruce to his home when he was quite suspicious about the grappling hook in the first place.
  
  The grammar and spelling could use a round of editing and spellchecking. A little spit and polish if you will.

  Author's response

  Thanks and no it wasn't really supposed to be completely based on traditional batman. it's batman growing up just as superman's growing up. But your advice is really helpful.

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