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• The Lemon Games

  (#) Aximand 2014-03-21

  Cut his hair. Sea urchin hair is part of the Naruto character, the more personality and physical traits you take away from Naruto, the less he is that character and the more he becomes an OC. Besides, the "long hair is cool" trope is annoying and overused.

  Author's response

  I make no promises on Naruto's hair. i haven't decided if I want to cut it yet or keep it long.
  
  Time will tell, sorry

• The Lemon Games

  (#) MikeJV37 2014-03-21

  First, I disagree about Naruto's look... besides, it's your fic ad you can do what you want with Naruto. (and I like his new look and the direction you're going with it). As to this chapter, loved it, great stuff start to finish, a GREAT read. Love Naruto's skills and how you do thim, great job with Isaribi, and Anko... wink Great job on the date too, very ncie, and I hope the posting trend continues, for you and me.

• The Lemon Games

  (#) aznxa21 2014-03-21

  Haha Hellsing Ultimate, nice to see you are back. Good chapter.

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  (#) Akuma-Heika 2014-03-22

  Who is Nana’s master? Kyu or Sennin?
  
  I think it wouldn’t be bad for him to collect special blades. Just because Zabuza has one does not mean he has to take it after all
  
  If only two have been told then by default only shino and Shikamaru could figure it out.
  
  There was a NaruIsa lemon and you skipped it T_T
  
  Chakra wings?
  
  The Reverse Seal that Danzo used as a kamikaze technique?
  
  Cannot be that good since it was the prototype to the seal he took off Sasuke.
  
  Think it would be his Earth Manipulation being used to separate contaminants.
  
  How does he put his hand on her chakra?
  
  LIKED it long
  
  I might have asked but does ninja master push things above 200 if their base stat I high enough?
  
  Thanks for returning! any idea what azna means by hellsing ultimate? did i miss your naruto becoming a No-Life King lol?

  Author's response

  Who I leave off until later.
  
  Naruto likely will be collecting several more very special blades in the course of this story.
  
  Everyone, at this point, has been told that Naruto is being hunted. What for, not everyone knows.
  
  There originally was a lemon between Naruto and Isaribi, I pulled it because I didn't like it and I hope I had gotten every bit of detail that said he had it.
  
  Yes, Naruto has wings made of chakra, much like how Fuu can do.
  
  I suppose you can consider it to be Danzo's kamikaze seal
  
  It is the prototype. But who is to say that Orochimaru didn't make Sasuke's better through ways that weakened the seal?
  
  Earth might be used if he was using solely earth stuff. With water he uses water, with air, he'll use air.
  
  Might have to reread that and change it if that's what I said.
  
  Yes and no, it's a bit difficult to explain how I see it in my head, but for the sake of arguing right now, yes it can push things over 200
  
  Watching Hellsing Ultimate Abridged by TeamFourStar, then re-read the last two chapters. You should see the references.

• The Lemon Games

  (#) FireDragon14 2014-03-22

  Nice chapter. Have to ask though, when is Naruto going to get intimate with Hinata?

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  (#) mcedwards1112 2014-03-23

  Great chapter as always keep up the good work

• The Lemon Games

  (#) UncleFester81 2014-03-27

  Finally a date without the white eyed wonder, I was afraid this was turning into a naruhina fic

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