I liked the build up to the reveal, even if it was a bit obvious (H/Hr story without H - he had to show up soon). You couldn't of stretched it out much longer without making it boring to me. I like Hermione in this, but it would be nice to have Hermione's reason for not returning her parents memories; and who would have been the fourth for their bridge game? A possible sibling?
I'm salivating waiting for the next chapter!
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