(#) OuTlawGigabyTe 2014-10-12Enjoying the story so far. But, it may seem lame, one major issue in this chapter... Glocks don't have safetys and their hammers aren't exposed..
Author's responseYup, I realize that now. The 22 doesn't have a real safety. I could say that due to it being Magical Law Enforcement they added the safety to make it well safer. Truth of the matter is though that I don't know a great deal about hand guns.
- Just so you know, I've rated every chapter, including this one (I did not rate it boring!).
Very exciting, great fight scene! It took her long enough to figure out where Harry was, I was getting worried there.
I can't wait to find out if Harry lives and Hermione gets her mind blown.
Author's responseThanks Zucht. Glad you've enjoyed the story so far as that's the reason I posted it here, so others can enjoy it.
(#) perrinslip 2014-10-14I have enjoyed the story so far.
The previous reviewer is right though, the author should change the information in regards to the Glock, possibly changing the weapon for a Sig or possibly check and see what the Aussie Special forces issues.
Author's responseI think, at the time I wro0te this story I googled what weapon was used by Aussie Police and it was the Glock 22. That was a while ago so I may be wrong about that.
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