When all hope seems lost and everybody is dead, Harry transports his soul into the body of his one year old self. This time, he's going to try and set things right.
- Great start... please update soon.
I especially liked that Voldemort got sucked back too, that should be very interesting.
I'm also looking forward to find out how long back they went... Before James and Lilly died -- can Harry do something about that? Before Hogwarts -- can Minerva remove Harry from his abusive relatives? Can they begin to groom Harry's future friends? Before Cedric dies -- can Harry save him? Can he hold off Voldermort's return? Before Sirius dies?
Also, how will Harry with the body of a child -- maybe even before he recieves his letter -- but with a mind/memory (and perhaps magic) of an adult, cope (or deal ;-) with his abusive relatives and school (especially if Dumbledore has yet not been informed)? Will he start fledgling DA early?
Keep up the good work, and please update real soon!
(#) SiriusStains 2007-03-20 02:05:18 PMi read the origonal a long time ago and remember being disappointed that it was left unfinshed. Its been so long that i can't notice any changes as of yet that you have made..but evne so i'm thrilled taht you have taken up thsi story...it has so much potential. I LOVE well written time travel or rewrite stories. I love how small seemingly insignificant events and changes can have huge imapcts.
- Well, it's been four years since you published the first chapter. Sort of a flash in the pan, then nothing. If I had to wait four years to read the second chapter of a book, I wouldn't even be able to find the book. Do your self a favor and pull this story. Leaving it up is doing nothing but irritating your potential readers, or at least mark it abandoned. You started off good, but where's the beef?
--a very frustrated reader.