(#) youkai_girl 2006-09-01I certainly found it interesting. I'm not sure, however, if Tsubaki is an OC, or if she actually exists in the manga. I've always thought that Ritsuka would choose Soubi in the end, if he ever discovered his "own" fighter. It was a good story though, and I look forward to more from you.
- Ooo! I love Loveless...for your very first fic, it is beautifully written! Is Tsubaki a made up character, or is she really in the manga? I'm awfully curious about it...I've been trying to read the Loveless manga too and I don't think I've crossed that name.
Anyways, please keep up the fabulous work. I hope your write more!
(#) thedaemonqueenlilith 2006-10-01Beautifully written. Your portrayal of the characters is excelently done. Only Kio seems to be a bit lacking. My personal favorite character in this is Tsubaki, which for me is unusual because I am wont to loathe original charaters (so many people just throw them in there without a second thought) but you not only created a wonderful charater but one whom fit into the story and setting flawlessly. Thank you for writting and posting such a wonderful fic.
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