In this chapter, Archie and Atlanta travel with the others that are stuck in the dream world, but soon stop at a new campsite for the night. But Archie falls prey to the "water-demons" and Atlanta ...
(#) Kate aka Bluebelle aka o0olalao0o 2006-08-29 06:32:23 PMWELL I sent you a nice little message to your Neopets account without realizing you haven't been on for 43 days =P Anywho, it's BLUEBELLE AGAIN and I have to say it's pretty much a tie between Arrows Of Love and Land Of Dreams. Can I be your one person posse?
Author's responselol yeah I haven't been on there for awhile because I quit my guild that I had created (it was good, I just got bored of it...) and so I figured my mail would be fulllll... but maybe I'll go there later.
Hey, I know you, you go to tv.com :) :) lol so do I. Anyway, lol uhhh one person posse? Sure, have at it lol. thanks for reviewing.
(#) Kate aka Bluebelle aka o0olalao0o 2006-08-29 06:33:06 PMWELL I sent you a nice little message to your Neopets account without realizing you haven't been on for 43 days =P Anywho, it's BLUEBELLE AGAIN and I have to say it's pretty much a tie between Arrows Of Love and Land Of Dreams. Can I be your one person posse?
- YAY! You finially updated!!!! woooo!!!!! 10 out of ten!!! five star story!!!
Author's responseYAY I FINALLY UPDATED! lol. Thanks for the 10 out of 10 rating, lol. Anyway I'll work on another update soon, kk? Thanks for reviewing! :)
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-08-30 12:45:35 AMWoo, You updated!!! The water-demons sound interesting, please update soon.
Author's responseYep I updated :) They do, don't they? You'll find out more about them in the next chapter, who knows? Maybe they'll make another entrance... ??? lol. Maybe not. Thanks for reviewing! :)
(#) chickiedeedo 2006-08-30 02:58:58 AMyeah thanks for the update this is one of my faveourite storys and you are a good writer update soon.
Author's responseThank you, it's nice to hear that people enjoy my writing :) Anyway, thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoy it so much. I'll try and have another update soon, before school starts next Tuesday :)
(#) Coffeebean(to lazy to log in,once again) 2006-08-30 05:23:09 PMEros:Alright I've decided to lock the chinchilas in the closet for now so i can take over their deties untill they break free.If your wondering why it's cause im on a mission to make Coffeebean find true love(and no the computer does not count)if you wanna help say so! could really use it an-
Coffeebean:Eros have you seen the chinchilas lately?WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING ON MY COMPUTER!!!!
Eros:Oh dear Zeus help me..
Coffeebean:Well since hes reveiwing your story I might as well say somthing to.first off I love this chapter,thats so like A/A,and poor archie,it seems like things in water are obsessed with attacking him!and yay lanny for saving his sorry but..AGAIN!Now if only someone would save my butt from Eros here...wait a second,why are you here?
Eros:Thats for me to know and you to find out
Coffeebean:It better not have anything to do with making me true love or any of that crap
Eros:You know I'll get you sooner or later,if anyone out there has an idea or wants to help me help Coffeebean here please say so!I could really use it.
Author's responselol ahh more funny moments in your review. Good times... hmm now as for Eros, I think you should work on kidnapping Herry from Class of the Titans and create a match--- MWAUHAHAHAHA! lol.
Anyway, glad you liked this chapter lol, and yes, water things do like attacking him. I actually came across the legend purely by accident while flipping through my book for some other legend. Quite interesting. Reminds me of Harry Potter cough cough Harry Potter copies so much of Greek Mythology, it's not even funny... lol.
Thanks for reviewing!