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A moment of kindness

by Corrupt_Innocence 3 Reviews

Although neither of them remember it, Baralai and Yuna met long before their 'first meeting' in Bevelle. Braska and his Guardians had just defeated Sin, leaving a very lonely girl to roam the stree...

Category: Final Fantasy X-2 - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters: Baralai, Yuna - Published: 2006/09/01 - Updated: 2006/09/01 - 1271 words

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  • A moment of kindness

    (#) Kitt 2007-11-04 01:16:11 PM

    Really cute story. I love reading fics about characters when they were little. And kudos for the way the ending complemented the beginning!

    My only gripes are for you to watch your formatting (although I know sites like these can screw that up big time. It's always good to edit your story after you upload it just in case the site butchered it), and whenever you have a number in a sentence, it should be spelled out (e.g. "fifteen" instead of "15"). Other than that, great job!

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