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The Curious Case of Luna Lovegood
(#) MRWEBSTER 2018-04-18
Please for the sake of my brain and its sanity learn the words except and accept. Also learn their derivatives such as excepting and accepting etc. You drag your story down, right into the mud when you don't use these words properly. Your story has a good premise and it's quite original. Don't let something like the above ruin it.
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