(#) mextaintedemo 2006-09-03 08:04:07 PMdude i loooove this story. i wrote one too and i was wondering if u could tell me what u thinka bout it? i only have two chps so far. its in the mcr category. its called: it wasn't just an interview
Author's responseThanks so much. I read it and you have a great start so far. Keep going.
- Hi, hmmm, strip poker. Interesting lol.
Anyway, I didn't like the blonde at first but now i really like it. It looks good.
Oh and GET WELL SOON BOB!!!
Well, I was watching my friends play while I was writting. I actually suck at the game.
It was just so shocking!
The ice that was in my mouth when I was watching the VMA's fell out. I couldnt believe it!
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-09-04 11:26:02 AMhaha thats great. I knew it was Pete the minute i read the part about her bumping into the guy. Great story. Write more soon.
Author's responseYou are the only ne who figured it out.
I kind of had a hard time seeing pete as being rude, but I had to!
It had to work into what I was wanting to write!
Thanks for the review.