"There was one thing Raito knew for certain; as fascinating as watching L could be, it never failed to piss him off." L/R
- Ha! Oh, poor Raito. I love L, but I think it would be hard enough to live with him normally (of course he's doing it on purpose!), without never being able to get away for a moments peace like Raito.
One small thing that threw me out of the story for a minute was the line "And he ate cherries entirely too much." All I could think after reading that was that we've never seen him eat cherries at all, let alone often. But after that I got drawn right back in because, hey, he's eating them then and that's what matters.
- The one little problem I had with this story was this line here:
"I can't believe you just spit at me!"
I think the correct tense would be spat, rather than spit...
It just sounds a little jarring put that way.
But giggles it was enjoyable watching L torment Light. =D