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7 Reviews"There was one thing Raito knew for certain; as fascinating as watching L could be, it never failed to piss him off." L/R
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Their Favourite Pastime
(#) Person 2005-06-26 03:29:02 PM
Ha! Oh, poor Raito. I love L, but I think it would be hard enough to live with him normally (of course he's doing it on purpose!), without never being able to get away for a moments peace like Raito.
One small thing that threw me out of the story for a minute was the line "And he ate cherries entirely too much." All I could think after reading that was that we've never seen him eat cherries at all, let alone often. But after that I got drawn right back in because, hey, he's eating them then and that's what matters. -
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(#) Qem 2006-04-19 01:31:47 AM
The one little problem I had with this story was this line here:
"I can't believe you just spit at me!"
I think the correct tense would be spat, rather than spit...
It just sounds a little jarring put that way.
But giggles it was enjoyable watching L torment Light. =D -
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(#) Ookami 2006-04-28 10:00:33 AM
Heh heh. This one was funny. Will you write a sequel to this one? -
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(#) kiki-sama 2006-09-11 06:35:38 PM
Cute. I liked how L spit the pit at Raito-kun. Too bad it didn't go 'kaplunk' against the younger's forehead. That wouldn've been funny. -
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(#) flying_angel 2008-06-14 08:16:05 AM
i laughed my butt off! i like nothing more than watching Ryuuzaki piss Ratio off! light's too judgemental; i'd love to live with L!!!! plz write more of this!!!