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Spilt Ink

One day, I will be able to tell my son that he does not have to live up to his father's image, because Lucius Malfoy is not his father.' Oneshot, Narcissa's Diary.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Draco, Lucius, Lupin, Narcissa - Published: 2006/09/05 - Updated: 2006/09/05 - 1049 words - Complete

Reviews

• Spilt Ink

  (#) JesusKetchum31 2006-09-05 02:37:03 PM

  WOW! I love how completely cold and calculating Lucius is... and, of course, I like seeing the motherly side of Narcissa. Excellent characterization! Wow, though. Such suspense. It's a dark look into a possible... ...whoah. Draco Lupin? Whoa. Just. Whoa.
  
  The only problems I noticed were that first you have him close the book, and then you say that he had her read it. Plus, you spelled "aloud" as "allowed." Other than that though, this is AMAZING. Good job!

• Spilt Ink

  (#) PatriciaLouise 2006-09-07 09:45:07 AM

  Poor Remus...he so does not know what's going on, does he? Mean ol' Lucius!!

• Spilt Ink

  (#) herk444 2006-09-11 09:19:57 AM

  AWSOME!! At the end when Lucius said "Remus Lupin." I screamed "OOOOOOH SNAP!!" At my computer and did a dance. Utterly wonderful.

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