"You sure you're up to this? Don't faint on me now." he smirked, his look a little colder than usual as he started dribbling.
"Just bring it emo boy, I'm more in shape than you are." I spat, gua...
Yaaay. I was so happy to that you updated. =]
I love your story.
(#) getup_n_go 2006-09-06 08:33:35 PM
omg, please dont let them break up! im on the edge of my seat! update, quick! lol
(#) Blitzy 2006-09-07 07:29:33 AM
OMG TOTALLY AMAZING! And this cracked me up (amongst other things):
"How many times does your sister get married?"
I dunno, we'll have to sit back, wait and find out, now won't we.
this story is soo amazing. you are soo talented. please keep writing!!! :)
(#) KatieLove 2006-09-09 06:59:31 AM
[I noticed that on One Tree Hill too. I love the show, but the writing for some of it is absolutely terrible.]
And, I love the story. It just gets better and better. :-)
awesome! Update soon...i cant wait!
really like the way you write, you create great images with your words and now i want to read more ;)
(#) Blitzy 2006-10-02 12:58:55 PM
I've been wondering.....what happens when she goes home for the wedding? And what will the boys will do with their time while she's not around? And how is Brendon going to help her realize that she is beautiful just as she is?
Great story! I really hope that they resolve their problems. Please keep writing!
(#) MafiaQueen007 2006-11-19 07:28:16 PM
YEA! I totally agree! Damn shows are as good as shit! I seriously wish I could take a hatchet to ehichever imbescile creates these shows. Then I would burn all manuscripts.
I'll assume you're talking about either TRL or One Tree Hill, since those are the only shows I talk about. I hate One Tree Hill. I don't understand why the show is so popular. If you get a chance, look for the ep where Pete is on OTH online somewhere, like youtube or buzznet. The script alone should convince anyone never to watch the show again. It's gag worthy.