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Cries of the Suffering

Plans are made and plans are broken. Some plans, however, are manipulated to follow a chosen path. [AU DSM Revan]

Category: Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Bastila Shan, Darth Malak, Master Vandar, Master Vrook, Revan - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/09/09 - Updated: 2006/09/09 - 3968 words

Reviews

• Cries of the Suffering

  (#) snowman 2006-09-09 04:39:57 PM

  Great start.

• Cries of the Suffering

  (#) karmanta4real 2006-10-01 11:53:11 AM

  i like it.
  "Much potential in this one there is."
  
  the more you write the better you will get so keep writing.

• Cries of the Suffering

  (#) marclim27 2006-11-04 07:21:04 AM

  Nice.... though i wonder, are you going to continue this? or just leave it as a one-shot?

• Cries of the Suffering

  (#) cloudenstein 2009-01-15 10:46:35 AM

  A great start of what could become a
  more-than-average story.
  Like the two previous reviews, I would like to see more of this in the future.
  
  Also, I congratulate you on the fact that there are very few mistakes in your grammar, but still, it would do good to re-check it from time to time.
  
  Keep on the good work friend.
  
  Let's hope this is not a one-shot ;)
  LAter.

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