Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > Transformation
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Transformation
(#) citrus-lime 2006-09-19 12:33:46 PM
hey that was pretty good but work on building the characters and descipsions -
Transformation
(#) iheartyou07 2006-09-26 02:48:40 PM
that was great, loved the neil part, were he was like'thankkk you.' haha. its really good, and i understand what you mean about rushing, anf typing fast, but one thing you could try to do if you have time is maybe just add a little more description, but otherwise its awesome! love live JT!!