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Doughnuts

by redex 3 Reviews

DouWata. Etable symbolism and meddling.

Category: xXxHolic - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/09/22 - Updated: 2006/09/22 - 1245 words - Complete

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  • Doughnuts

    (#) AnAwesomeUsername 2006-10-04 05:10:12 PM

    I heart!!!! Its so youi it makes me happy.... write another one please!!! puppy dog eyes I think it was a touch clieq.... I can't spell.... it was too sudden, and the names were spelled diffrently then I'd ever seen.... but it was sweet :D
  • Doughnuts

    (#) LordPocky 2007-02-05 08:27:28 AM

    That's cute. A lil OOC on both parts but fluffy and cute well made up for it x3 I liked it, good job.
    Then again it seems that to make any pairings for like..anything both or atleast one needs to be OOC o.o continues rambling on
  • Doughnuts

    (#) RyokoJesse 2007-10-17 04:57:38 AM

    If this was canon, there would have been a reason behind the demand for a kiss, there would have been Yuuko at the end laughing because she knew where he was, and there would have been Watanuki asking why Doumeki was getting doughnuts and a "because I suddenly got a craving" response.

    But, my dear, you are not CLAMP and therefore have no intention of making us doubt the validity and mlove that is douwata. You need no reason to make the shippers doubt, no desire to torture us with possible "it's not just because I want to" kisses.

    In which sense, I say this was lovely and in character and made me feel WAFF-y.

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