Categories > Original > Fantasy
God Has No Place Here
2 ReviewsVampyre. It was a word feared above all others but the Devil himself. Now, when the world of a young girl and that of an ancient way of life collide, how will both survive? The 1700's were full ...
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God Has No Place Here
(#) purecrystaltears 2006-10-10 04:16:41 PM
AHH!!! Neat, neat, neat, neat! I LOVE this story! And wow wow, your writing has REALLY improved!
Have you been practicing or something?
But yeah, this is a VERY good story! And I love how you make everyone talk! They really sound like they're from the 1700's! Go you!
And, heh, vampire. ::grins happily::Author's response
Ahh yes. Thank you muchles! I would hope that my writing has improoved... phew...it was horrendous earlier on.
And thank you for notocing details. Yes, the way these people talk is very important to me. I always try and keep it relative to the date in which the setting takes place. It just REALLY bothers me when people wright stories that take place long ago, and yet insert their own voices into the characters. It just keeps things from flowing.
So yes, thankyou so so so so so so so much for reviewing! -
God Has No Place Here
(#) Momo - Is - Friend 2006-11-07 08:22:39 PM
Woot! Awesome new chapters that I just read today! XD I'm a tad behind...
Man. She has a bunch of stuff happening to her at once, doesn't she? Finding out her cousin's a vampire, yelling at her friend, being slammed into a wall, waking up in a place she doesn't know, in clothes she doesn't know, suddenly being gorgeous...
I dunno about you, but I'd probably pass out with extreme brain damage, thinking I was crazy. :p
But... I'd take all of that stuff to be suddenly gorgeous! ::closes eyes:: Okay! Make me beautiful now!
... Okay, since that doesn't seem to be working...
GREAT CHAPTERS! Loove them! Again, your writing has MUCH improved! Like, majorly!
Let me know when you get the next chapter out! ::blows kisses:: Love ya dahling!