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Chapter Eleven
1 reviewAfter Zanarkand, Cid and Lulu see each other once more. Which means actual face-to-face conversation, yay!
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Drawn Toward Unity
(#) helluin 2007-03-29
I sense this was a tricky chapter to write, finally getting the two of them together. Masterful handling of Chappu there -- reminding us that she's still having to see him every day in the face of two others.
Idle thought: you're so good at capturing Lulu's thoughts. A little more of Cid's too, maybe? Although I suppose you did exactly that, this chapter, noting how odd it is for him to see Yuna for the first time (a thought too many writers seem to forget, they really hadn't met each other before).
Betareaderism: "I know how much it hurts when [[you]] see someone..."
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