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Dance

When you go, leave behind something beautiful. GenHaya.

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: Genma, Hayate - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/07/02 - Updated: 2005/07/03 - 2445 words - Complete

Reviews

• Dance

  (#) MiikoAshida 2005-11-21 01:52:09 PM

  This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read. The concept was perfectly examined and shown throughout, and the ending fit perfectly. As far as writing style and word choice, you have an exquisite voice. I can't really criticze this story, except to say that you perhaps mix the colloquial with more conventional language, which is a little awkward in places. Other than that, it was brilliant. ^_^

• Dance

  (#) Gaara -san 2006-08-20 10:54:16 AM

  Easily moved to tears.

• Dance

  (#) Lourdes 2007-02-15 02:48:03 PM

  Beautiful. I don't think I could describe it any better than that. You have a gift, you know that, right?

• Dance

  (#) chibitamashi 2008-02-06 09:56:05 PM

  -_-; I hate it when fanfics make me cry, but I have to say, this is a pairing I've never heard of and will have to follow up on. Hayate's persistence was touching, and the past-Hayate to present-Hayate juxtaposition was very affective (especially in when it's first given that Hayate's dead).
  
  Well done, I enjoyed you fic!

• Dance

  (#) quirky_sass 2008-12-01 01:34:59 PM

  I feel truly privileged to have read this fic. In fact it was a favorite...eh heh I simply thought i had reviewed when i hadn't. Sorry about that.
  
  Anyway. Back to being honored to have brushed against the presence of one such as yourself. I seriously believe that this pairing could have been in canon...Oh yeah, except for Yuugao. Shoot.
  
  Um, thank you.
  
  

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