(#) MiikoAshida 2005-11-21This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read. The concept was perfectly examined and shown throughout, and the ending fit perfectly. As far as writing style and word choice, you have an exquisite voice. I can't really criticze this story, except to say that you perhaps mix the colloquial with more conventional language, which is a little awkward in places. Other than that, it was brilliant. ^_^
(#) chibitamashi 2008-02-06-_-; I hate it when fanfics make me cry, but I have to say, this is a pairing I've never heard of and will have to follow up on. Hayate's persistence was touching, and the past-Hayate to present-Hayate juxtaposition was very affective (especially in when it's first given that Hayate's dead).
Well done, I enjoyed you fic!
(#) quirky_sass 2008-12-01I feel truly privileged to have read this fic. In fact it was a favorite...eh heh I simply thought i had reviewed when i hadn't. Sorry about that.
Anyway. Back to being honored to have brushed against the presence of one such as yourself. I seriously believe that this pairing could have been in canon...Oh yeah, except for Yuugao. Shoot.
Um, thank you.
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