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Still Life in Monochrome
4 ReviewsOf Hatake Kakashi, and the things that can make a human being, or break them utterly.
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Still Life in Monochrome
(#) redex 2006-04-18 05:58:04 PM
I know I've reviewed this over at effeffdotnet, but I just wanted to make my presence felt over here too. Your Kakashi is killer-deadly, in more than one way, and the murder you do to him only makes for good fiction.
Your choice of diction and story structure are just too perfect. You've got all the bases covered, and it's so very obvious that you do.
Thank you for gracing us with your talents! ;) -
Still Life in Monochrome
(#) sanguineus 2006-05-25 09:51:17 PM
Ooh, I've stalked you a bit on the Hidden Village archive. This was great! Well, by great I mean horribly, ridiculously, and SICKLY depressing.
Ugh. I like you. This sads me. But I like it, too. :) It was very good, letting the reader know what was happening without describing the gory details >.> oh, man. Poor Tsunade ;.; KAKASHI grah. Sorry, this is a dumb review, but I very much enjoyed your fic. -
Still Life in Monochrome
(#) noisee 2007-07-11 08:36:29 PM
That was beautiful. I totally understand how you creep yourself out, that was heart-breakingly terrifying and AMAZING. -
Still Life in Monochrome
(#) Call_it_Karma 2008-05-19 02:53:14 PM
"I'm going to kill myself either way," he murmured blankly, "might as well do it the way that's useful."
This was probably, in a morbid way, the best line in the story. It sums up every sentiment Kakashi felt, and I think it was pretty true to his character (duty to the village, practicality).
I like that you didn't use too much dialogue, because the few times you did it really made the statements POP.
Try not to be creeped out....part of being a great writer is the ability to expand your mind...branching out into an area that seems uncomfortable can be kinda good.