A quick review of the Four Vows reminds Jin that desire is illusion - or maybe not.
Jin x Mugen
There's guys kissing in this. So don't read it if you don't like that kind of thing.
Very good - I liked Jin's tactics very much!
This was really nice, I liked the involvement of the prayer, it added a nice detail to unify the story.
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Now that was...tasty.
I need a post coital cigarette - it was that satisfying.
swearing at the stupid button
Eee~! Terrific. Surrender. Retreat. Capitulation or capture? Jin's skills are, apparently, quite profound, and his tactics unbeatable. And Fuu! The girl is very, very smart, indeed.
Wow. Really nice. Very in character and lovely insights into Jin's mind. I enjoyed how you brought the two of them together. Great job!
Just as good on the second reading as it was on the first! Both guys in character and very true to the series.
(#) Qem 2006-04-16
I liked this a lot, especially the way that Fuu described the both of them. Too true. =D
(#) Ldesu 2008-06-12
happy sigh that was a yummy ficsnak
Childlike, frustrated, exasperated Fuu. Purposeful, knowing, skillful Jin. Scornful, rough but needy Mugen.
You capture them so well.
The only bad thing about this story is this: It's just too short...
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