A quick review of the Four Vows reminds Jin that desire is illusion - or maybe not.
Jin x Mugen
There's guys kissing in this. So don't read it if you don't like that kind of thing.
(#) Louiselux 2005-07-03 04:56:19 AM
Very good - I liked Jin's tactics very much!
(#) spiralred 2005-08-05 03:58:25 PM
This was really nice, I liked the involvement of the prayer, it added a nice detail to unify the story.
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Now that was...tasty.
I need a post coital cigarette - it was that satisfying.
swearing at the stupid button
(#) Shayheyred 2005-10-26 08:49:52 PM
Eee~! Terrific. Surrender. Retreat. Capitulation or capture? Jin's skills are, apparently, quite profound, and his tactics unbeatable. And Fuu! The girl is very, very smart, indeed.
(#) San (hungry_worm) 2005-11-21 04:50:11 PM
""AND YOU - " she hissed, poking him in the middle of the chest with a surprisingly hard small finger - "ARE JUST AS BAD. He doesn't think at all, and you think way too much!" // Then she seemed to relent, reached up and settled his glasses back on his nose for him. "You. You're as blind with those things on as without them." "
What to say, what to say... I simply love it, the tone, the characterizations, everything. The way it feels during the read is incredibly nice, and I've read it more than once now. You've got a way with words and always manage to create such a capturing atmosphere. Well done!
Wow. Really nice. Very in character and lovely insights into Jin's mind. I enjoyed how you brought the two of them together. Great job!
(#) Corenn 2006-03-21 03:07:36 PM
I like it... Funny and nice^^
(#) uppsydaisy 2006-04-05 06:50:16 PM
Just as good on the second reading as it was on the first! Both guys in character and very true to the series.
(#) Qem 2006-04-16 05:24:49 PM
I liked this a lot, especially the way that Fuu described the both of them. Too true. =D
(#) Jain 2006-09-03 07:50:01 AM
This is just gorgeous. Jin's inner voice is wonderful, and I love seeing Mugen uncertain and caught offguard.