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Immortal Retribution
5 reviews(("No, I wanted to be a vampire." He stated simply.)) a short story by a friend of mine and I. vamps and the works. oneshot
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Immortal Retribution
(#) herk444 2006-10-05
"Revenge is a dish best served cold." Oh yes, that quote is quite fitting to this story. Impossibly dark yet transfixing. Perfectly written, the irony is amazing. A few times however, I was confused as to the setting, but I figured it out in time. Very nice, a truely beautiful short-story.Immortal Retribution
(#) purecrystaltears 2006-10-09
WOOT! Yay us! It looks good to me!
But I swear, this story seriously looks way smaller on an actual website than double spaced and on paper.
Let's keep our fingers crossed for the contest! ::crosses fingers::Author's response
yah i know!!! it kinda makes you freak out then cuz your's like "oh sht oh sht is it long enough??"
but we sent it in, and let's pray!Immortal Retribution
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14
Hey, I'm new.
Wow, this is so awesome. I love vampire so much. Keep it up, ok? Till next time!
adaku-chanAuthor's response
hey, thanx for the review. vampires rock the world's sox, yo ^^ i'm gonna check out your story when i can, herki seems to like it a lot, so it must be good. latahImmortal Retribution
(#) mpbcrock 2008-10-30
immortal retribution ism a rs clan so dont go riping the name offImmortal Retribution
(#) Kettles 2008-11-24
What the fuck is an rs clan? If you want to say something scathing or slightly smart to me, try using a spell-check first. And it doesn't matter what the title is, only the content. Therefore, you can suck my balls, okay? Have a great day.
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