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Immortal Retribution

(("No, I wanted to be a vampire." He stated simply.)) a short story by a friend of mine and I. vamps and the works. oneshot

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/10/04 - Updated: 2006/10/04 - 3190 words

Reviews

• Immortal Retribution

  (#) herk444 2006-10-05 12:13:39 PM

  "Revenge is a dish best served cold." Oh yes, that quote is quite fitting to this story. Impossibly dark yet transfixing. Perfectly written, the irony is amazing. A few times however, I was confused as to the setting, but I figured it out in time. Very nice, a truely beautiful short-story.

• Immortal Retribution

  (#) purecrystaltears 2006-10-09 08:52:43 AM

  WOOT! Yay us! It looks good to me!
  
  But I swear, this story seriously looks way smaller on an actual website than double spaced and on paper.
  
  Let's keep our fingers crossed for the contest! ::crosses fingers::

  Author's response

  yah i know!!! it kinda makes you freak out then cuz your's like "oh sht oh sht is it long enough??"
  
  but we sent it in, and let's pray!

• Immortal Retribution

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 01:44:11 PM

  Hey, I'm new.
  
  Wow, this is so awesome. I love vampire so much. Keep it up, ok? Till next time!
  
  adaku-chan

  Author's response

  hey, thanx for the review. vampires rock the world's sox, yo ^^ i'm gonna check out your story when i can, herki seems to like it a lot, so it must be good. latah

• Immortal Retribution

  (#) mpbcrock 2008-10-30 04:10:32 PM

  immortal retribution ism a rs clan so dont go riping the name off

• Immortal Retribution

  (#) Kettles 2008-11-24 07:03:40 AM

  What the fuck is an rs clan? If you want to say something scathing or slightly smart to me, try using a spell-check first. And it doesn't matter what the title is, only the content. Therefore, you can suck my balls, okay? Have a great day.

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