by poet_murder 3 reviewsAn angel falls from heaven, for want of what God has.
Category: Horror - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy, Horror - Published: 2006-10-04 - Updated: 2006-10-04 - 2404 words - Complete
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This is so good! I'm not even joking! I love the myth of the fallen angels. It's so good! I will stalk you till you update!
There are a few places where your tenses are off, and I'm not positive I like the frequent repetition of the lack of semicolons in places that could probably use them, but all and all, I like this well enough.
I loved this story. . .I've always been interested in the fall of the angels and how hell and demons were formed.
Of course I was also kinda interested because my name is Sephora. . . but that's beside the point.
Loved it! xoxo
-Sephie
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