A "sequel" of sorts to "Mentor and Protégé," in which Dumbledore confronts Harry's betrayers...
(#) Barkeeper 2005-07-04 12:03:51 PM
Nice one. I think i discovered some bits from my idea of an epilogue. Well done.
Keep up the good work.
Outstanding, I loved seeing Dumbledore rip into them a bit, though I could have stood to see him tear into the Weasley's, Granger, and Chang a bit more, but it was enjoyable none the less. Thank you.
(#) Santaclaws 2005-07-05 02:25:12 PM
Noooooooooo you can't do this!
It just wouldn't be right abandoning such a nice plot, the end just screams for a next part to finish this story!
Great story. I loved it when old Dumbledore told them off. I would love to know what Dumbledore and Harry do now? I hope you write more of this plot-line.
Review you later
(#) Raskanii 2005-07-07 09:32:07 AM
I like it. A lot. Do you think you could write a piece about the aftermath of Dumbledore's departure?
(#) Darkest Melody 2005-07-10 01:26:35 AM
Just loved it, a perfect telling off of those bastards! love it when Dumbledore is a good guy, and having him tell those pieces of filth off made my day- i had a really bad day- at least someone got to vent...lol
(#) Sparky 2005-08-23 05:51:58 AM
This is great work and I hope you do more. You should write story like this with lot of chapthers. This story is so cool and like the other one to even if no one has review the story.Please write more and think you.
(#) slashslut 2006-01-21 11:06:18 AM
yea, great story! id be quite interested to see what happens to everyone now that they dont have harry or dumbles . . . :)
(#) sandra37914 2006-07-21 12:07:47 AM
(#) kratos 2007-09-27 08:35:00 PM
WOW what a story this and the last are just bloody cool. This is the first one I have seen where Dumbledore is one of the people who trusted Harry right from the start. Maybe you should have him or harry become the minster. That would be so funny to see. Keep up the good work. Thanks and bye.