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Boingy!

A young man comes to Rockbell Automail with an unusual request...

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters: Pinako Rockbell, Winry Rockbell - Published: 2006/10/07 - Updated: 2006/10/08 - 2833 words - Complete

Reviews

• Boingy!

  (#) Misk 2006-10-08 10:05:08 AM

  This story is great! I would love to be a helpful reviewer and say things like, "This paragraph could be improved by..." but I think the whole darn thing is very good, so all I can do is gush. :-) Well, perhaps I can ask if it would do any harm if you indicated Winry's age earlier in the story? I wasn't quite sure how to picture her, so I was thinking of her as older than she was, which put a different spin on my understanding of her reactions at the door, and Pinako's motivations. So that would be the only thing I'd wonder about.

• Boingy!

  (#) Regaime 2006-11-15 10:28:21 AM

  i haven't blushed so much in...about a day. lol. my sick mind guessed the..."limb" in the summery and i was like, no fucking way...WAY. O.O lmao. that was hilarious

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