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Pandora's Box

Sweat flies off her, hits the ground and hisses like poison. She wants to peel away her skin, to crack out of her body and escape, but all she can do is raise her arms and move faster. This stor...

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/10/10 - Updated: 2006/10/11 - 787 words - Complete

Reviews

• Pandora's Box

  (#) elizedward23 2006-10-13 10:10:06 PM

  Wow, I really like it! The descriptions are beautifully dark. I was hooked from the start!

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.

• Pandora's Box

  (#) Luna Lovegod 2006-10-14 08:50:38 AM

  wow this is great, you did a fantastic job.
  if you don't mind, I would like you to read mine. Its called Kingdom of the Elements, I hope you like, i loved yours
  OO and it says its by Reko, but its by me :)and its fantasy

  Author's response

  Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I read yours as well and it has a lovely premise. I love it when authors make up a whole new world in their stories, keep up the good work.

• Pandora's Box

  (#) Dirk 2007-09-13 05:15:29 AM

  Very good. The words were captivating. I liked the visual imagery of "the mirrors facing the wall." For some reason, that really stuck with me

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