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Liksmoerbataljonsaga (The Tale of the Corpse-Butter Brigade)

by gunsandpocky 2 Reviews

Ull and his band of oddly-assorted hunters search for a notorious dealer in stolen children - valkyries and wolf-elves, anyone? Some language and violence

Category: Fantasy - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy - Characters:  - Published: 2006/10/13 - Updated: 2006/10/13 - 4035 words

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  • Liksmoerbataljonsaga (The Tale of the Corpse-Butter Brigade)

    (#) Vashti 2006-10-13 09:49:38 PM

    Good, as always. You might want to edit this one a little more though. I caught a few uncapitalized 'i's and you went from 'saami' to 'sami', you should probably pick a spelling... ^__^
  • Liksmoerbataljonsaga (The Tale of the Corpse-Butter Brigade)

    (#) PP 2007-02-12 07:21:07 AM

    Aw damn, it's like a week ago since I read this story first time, and I still snigger thinking about it. Especially this:

    "I'm not a monk," Tenshi said, "I've got too much hair...I can't remember the sutras, I can't remember the sutras..."

    "Did you just HIT me?"

    "And I hit people...."

    Oh, and the valkyrie's parting comment about her being the ride home - that's chilling.

    I really liked this universe; I hope you'll write more.

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