Chapter Two: Alpha Nine Emergency
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-10-14 11:25:28 AMLots of weasley stuff here. Interesting, although I'm not too big a fan of that tribe. It always seems like Grimauld Place is safr for everyone but Harry, even if he owns it! I do so Hope you will write Harry s a more realistic teenage boy that JKR does. (hint, hint.. I know from experience, that MY son would never put up with the crap that Harry does. She also went from Harry doing 'great magic' to being a total write off in the magic and balls departments.) Any way, looking forward to more of this story.
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-15 12:18:17 AMOkay I read your story. First of all its extremely well written, professionally done in fact, although I like independent harry I got to admit I am getting awful tired of crybaby wimp its all my fault harry potter. I realize this is your story and this type of story needs that type of harry I guess, but the main thing I want to say your summary really interested me, but so far there has been two chapters and no where near anything like you describe, I hope it shows up soon and gives him the will to get on with his life. be looking for hopefully more updates.
- nice story!
after the first chapter i would have thought that harry likes hermione too...this would be a nice touch for the story...
well...i'm a h/hr-shipper...so i interpret easier in that direction =P
Author's responseAre you related to Sybil Trelawney perhaps? I'll need to rethink my approach if I'm that obvious!
- What a great chapter, I like that Molly called Harry her child. After reading Skoell review and seeing your reply, I can't see this story can be a h/hr it's more like r/hr story.
Well anyhowm, I can't wait to see what happens next... so keep up the great work and update soon.