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Alpha Nine Emergency

by davidg2006 6 Reviews

Chapter Two: Alpha Nine Emergency

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance - Characters: Harry - Published: 2006/10/14 - Updated: 2006/10/14 - 3000 words


  • Harry Potter and the Rights to Life

    (#) foolishwandwaver 2006-10-14 11:25:28 AM

    Lots of weasley stuff here. Interesting, although I'm not too big a fan of that tribe. It always seems like Grimauld Place is safr for everyone but Harry, even if he owns it! I do so Hope you will write Harry s a more realistic teenage boy that JKR does. (hint, hint.. I know from experience, that MY son would never put up with the crap that Harry does. She also went from Harry doing 'great magic' to being a total write off in the magic and balls departments.) Any way, looking forward to more of this story.
  • Harry Potter and the Rights to Life

    (#) snowman 2006-10-14 08:20:14 PM

    Good start keep it up.
  • Harry Potter and the Rights to Life

    (#) jabarber69 2006-10-15 12:18:17 AM

    Okay I read your story. First of all its extremely well written, professionally done in fact, although I like independent harry I got to admit I am getting awful tired of crybaby wimp its all my fault harry potter. I realize this is your story and this type of story needs that type of harry I guess, but the main thing I want to say your summary really interested me, but so far there has been two chapters and no where near anything like you describe, I hope it shows up soon and gives him the will to get on with his life. be looking for hopefully more updates.
  • Harry Potter and the Rights to Life

    (#) Skoell 2006-10-15 02:53:54 AM

    nice story!

    after the first chapter i would have thought that harry likes hermione too...this would be a nice touch for the story...

    well...i'm a h/ i interpret easier in that direction =P

    Author's response

    Are you related to Sybil Trelawney perhaps? I'll need to rethink my approach if I'm that obvious!
  • Harry Potter and the Rights to Life

    (#) Dragen 2006-10-24 09:06:11 AM

    What a great chapter, I like that Molly called Harry her child. After reading Skoell review and seeing your reply, I can't see this story can be a h/hr it's more like r/hr story.

    Well anyhowm, I can't wait to see what happens next... so keep up the great work and update soon.

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