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• This Bitter Pill

  (#) moocow 2006-10-15

  They are gonna get it on, arent they?

• This Bitter Pill

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-10-16

  Great chapter - great story - awesome writing, total Kudos! XD

• This Bitter Pill

  (#) luckysgc921 2006-10-16

  uhh...can I love your story and seriously dislike your main character? 'cause thats the dilema I'm faced with. You know Pete's not my fav person and even I've been sitting here going 'dump the bitch!'
  Makes for great reading. I just really hope she winds up getting what she deserves--its like 'wake up and smell reality corbin'

• This Bitter Pill

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-27

  patrick the nice guy. it works, and what fun would it have been if she actually left?
  
  i like that you had patrick explain pete's actions, instead of narrarating it. it made it seem more realistic.

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