(#) greektitan 2006-10-19Omg what is going to happen to archie!Im scencing Danger of mythical proporitons!Lol..update soon and who cares,about you know short or mistakes Awsome story my heart is beating i wana know what will happen!UPDATE IM ADDING THIS TO FAVORITES!!
Author's responseHey greektitan, thank you alot! You've put a major
boost in my self-confadice level and inspired me to be a better writter.THANK YOU!!!!
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-19That was really good, especially for a first story! It sounds really interesting, and I understand that you said you were in a hurry/not trying to critisize, but adding a bit more description will make it a lot better! So update soon, cause I really want to know what happens!
Author's responseHey thanks.I take that is a complimment.
- Half the chapter was a author's note, The idea is really good just got to make it with more detail and maybe longer, But it's sounds like the start of a great story. Update soon
Author's responseThanks rainpaw,I like that your being honenst
and I will make much more detail next time!
- Oh and it's ok about the spelling, I have the same proubmle(sp) I just write the story on Word or something and then spell check it there then cut and paste it to the text box on the add story page. And the stuff the spell checker skips over most people don't care about. ^_^
Author's responsePowers of the not very good speller people unite!
(#) dancechickie222 2006-10-22it sounds like an awsom story and i'm not trying to be harsh or anything, but it could be a little longer, and use a little more detail. I'd like to read the next chapter and see what happens and what Rainpaw said is an awsome idea, thats exactly what I do becuz i always make those lil' errors cuz of how fast I type. So update it soon.
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