Chapter 5... let's just say that Michael doesn't turn out to be the good boy we all thought he was..., and Jay, uh, meets someone new... Please read:D
(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-10-22 07:18:44 PMhaha, loved this chapter, haha jealous Theresa is awesome... damn perverted Micheal! anywyas, i sent my bit of chappie one for our story this way, i hope you cna look over it, make changes adn add some.. anyways, keep up the great work adn update soon!
Author's responselmao, sorry Jess, I'm such a procrastinator! You sent it a while ago, yet I am a lazy bum. haha, what candy does to you... anyways, thanks for the awesome review, you rock!!
- YESS!!! i just saw crossroads too; FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!! omg it was so awesome but it was TO DAMN SHORT!! o well.tell me, how many peopel like cake in that show? Athena, witches, cerberus... o ya great story this should be interesting
Author's responselol, thanks for the review!
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-10-22 09:18:53 PMThat was a great chappie, that dam pervert Micheal... Archie may stand a chance now though, poor Theresa, please update as soon as you can
Author's responsehehe, yeah. Micheal, lol, like I said, I hated him, and now I hate Ashley... anyyways, we'll see about Archie.. lol. Thanks a bunch for your review hun, they mean a lot!!
(#) story_master 2006-10-23 01:50:14 PMhey!:D Awsome story! Yay! Atlanta has broken up with Micheal! Now Archie gets a second chance... hopefully. Poor Theresa though. If I were her I so would've done what she was thinking. lol. I hope that things do work out for them. And yeah I did watch See you at the crossroads! It's my fav episode too! That was awsome how Jay was so worried about Theresa and then how Theresa threw the cake at Hecate. (sorry a little imature there but ah well. lol) anyways awsome chapter! Keep uup the awsome work and please update soon!:D
Author's responsehey! Thanks, lol. Yup, Michael is so gone. I never liked him... and now there's Ashley... ugh, I dont like her either.. haha, ill get rid of her too!! thanks again for the review!! you rock!!
(#) fluffy pup 2006-10-23 03:13:11 PMi liked it please pu a/a together and why does jay think about cronus sooo much he is not my fav caracter but it just ennoys meee looooool
Author's responsethanks! I know, Jay pisses me off sometimes about that. Him and Cronus, god, THAT should be a pairing!
(#) JessieLD746 2006-11-18 03:26:41 PMI love this chapter! And I thank you for making Atlanta break up with Michael. Archie deserves a second chance. Update soon! And please put A/A together. Oh and did you read my stories yet? They're up there right now.
Author's responseLol, thanks. Yeah, Archie does deserve a second chance, but will Atlanta give it to him? And will he want it? Ooo, lol. thanks again for your review!