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Of Smurfs and Men

by azurehart 4 Reviews

"Shut up Greg, you're dead." Response to the Oct. 18th 2004 Unbound Improv Challenge. 1st & last lines given with a 1,000 word limit.

Category: CSI - Rating: G - Genres: Humor - Characters: Gil Grissom, Greg Sanders, Nick Stokes, Sara Sidle, Other - Published: 2006/10/24 - Updated: 2006/10/24 - 474 words - Complete

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  • Of Smurfs and Men

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-10-25 11:04:55 AM

    Your summary gives the story away.

    I don't see why Lindsay would be allowed in the break room of a CSI lab.

    Author's response

    I have removed the portion of the summary that you felt gave away the story plot.

    Strangly enough, no one else has mentioned that it would be unlikely for Lindsay to do her science project in the CSI breakroom. I do concede that it would be unlikely, but if memory serves I believe there was one or two instances before Lindsays Father died that Catherine was forced to bring Lindsay with her to work and Lindsay was allowed to stay in the breakroom.

    Thank you for taking the time to review and for your suggestions.

    ~AzureHart
  • Of Smurfs and Men

    (#) SecretOktober 2006-11-04 09:51:48 PM

    Awww, I liked this! Although I don't think I've ever heard Grissom talk so romanticaly to Sara, it was cute and funny.

    Author's response

    Thank you for taking the time to review!
  • Of Smurfs and Men

    (#) BandGeek92 2007-02-07 06:53:51 PM

    Hehehe Smurfs. Cute!

    Author's response

    Thank you for reviewing!
  • Of Smurfs and Men

    (#) JerseySpirit 2008-02-02 04:53:51 PM

    That was so awesome I wanna cry, but instead I'm laughing, but whatever, point is, HAHA!

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