not the usual suspects. this chapter reveals... well, it reveals.
- WHAT HAPPENED TO THE HOT, DURTY SECKS?!?!?!!
Author's responseokay, so is this a complaint?
but to answer your question, being caught up in the moment and then having to stop gives you a little bit of time to contemplate what you were about to do. maybe moving quickly and making irrational decisions might have affected their relationship negatively, and they only considered this after taking their tongues out of each others mouths. now, mind you, this is only a theory. i'm pretty much talking out of my ass at this point.
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-10-28 08:32:29 PMoh. my. god. what the fuck? damn, this girl gets into to much trouble. go fuck pete and stay with him. hehe. that's my advice to Belle. and don't worry about the damn condom. ok, its probably a good thing that he did remember. but still... oh yeah! i gotta a question! so is that brock guy the one that raped her?
Author's responseyea, we're trying to avoid baby mama drama right now.
and yes, he is. but you should be needing a motive, which is coming in the next chapter.
- So, more babies?
Author's responsemore? as in we're pregnant? or as in we've already had some? are they mine? or are they evies? i demand a paternity test. actually, no, i don't care. i'll claim the little bastards.
MORE NOW GOD DAMNIT!
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SHEE SHEE SHEEEEE!!!
Author's responsethe caps is equally noted, and that you for the excitment. hold on to your loafers, cause the rides about to get bumpy. but with everyone updating i've been spending time reading instead of writing. if everyone stopped making damn good stories then i could write more. dammit.
oh, and thanks. but i'll update if you do ;)
- On the edge of my seat! AHHHH!
Author's responseum, ditto. because you, my lady, need to update your shit. we are going to start signing legal contracts stating something along the lines of "crystal updates when lovela, frosted glass, imogen, evie, and heather do" that way we all get our cake, and eat it to. i dunno. i'll call my lawyers.
(#) AshleyChaotic 2006-10-29 12:49:57 PMYou story just flows.
Author's responsethat was one of the things i was insecure about with this story, telling myself it didn't "flow". thank you for helping me feel a little better about the "flowage"
and you have me addicted, so i guess we're even
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-01 10:11:04 AMLovely piece of fic! Loving the Elvis Costello and especially Patrick´s POV (agrees with his comments about Pete´s internet addiction/ picture whoring and the fan base). Exciting end with the phone call... I´ll be a sadist though and not hop onto the next chapter cos I need to write stuff down for my own next chapter until it escapes my jelly bean-sized brain. However, I WILL catch up soon. Cos the alternative is doing something for school... HA!
Author's responsei do not want to be responsible for a late update from you. people will have my head. seriously. i will probably have my own head.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-01 10:11:59 AM*masochist, not "sadist" ... yeah, I think I´ve mentioned the condition of my brain earlier...
Author's responsethat's okay. i've made a habit out of using "made" instead of "mad". bah.
(#) isuckatlifen 2006-12-18 12:11:04 PMwhat happened to the ativan evidence that they were going to talk to her about?