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Hate is a strong word, but I really really really don't like you.
(#) imogen993 2006-10-29
It started as a bit of a cliche story, but as i read this chapter, it got a bit better. I'm curious to know what happens with the brent dude.Author's response
ugh hes an ass
lol
u'll seeHate is a strong word, but I really really really don't like you.
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-11-01
CLIFFHANGER! YES!!!!Hate is a strong word, but I really really really don't like you.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-02
there is a lot of dialog, which is good because most of it is humorous, and i'm always in need of a good laugh. so kudos on that.
my only complaint is that you aren't really developing the characters. not that they aren't good characters, but it's hard to picture them and make them dimensional without good development.
anyway, i'm not trying to be a bitch, just a little constructive criticism. Keep writing, I’m excited to see where this is going.Author's response
lol thanks
yeah it is moving kinda slow
i figured it would unfrtunately but im trying! lol
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