Entry in Potter's Place 3 October Scene writing contest. Harry reflects on past Halloween's. Harry/Katie pairing May be turned into a full story
- this was nice... nothign to special... but like and comfortable. I really hope you can make something out of this. not a hugely complex story with Voldemort taking over the world and many people dieing. but just something flowing. where their relationship grows. harry continues to train, now with renewed hope and desire. He finally kills Voldy in a 'fair' duel. nothign overly special just the desire to win and live.
anyway, i hope to see a story. congrats.
- I would rate this as 'Moving'. You well capture how Harry must feel with a life not of his own and in which he finds little joy. All he wants is someone to touch him and love him. sniffle Gets you right here ;-)
Seriously, a nice little bit of work.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10