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• Get Busy Living Or Get Busy Dying

  (#) xtearcatcherx 2006-10-30

  neat-o!!!
  
  :^) aww stupid pete :P

• Get Busy Living Or Get Busy Dying

  (#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-10-30

  OK, you've got me excited to see where this goes next.

• Get Busy Living Or Get Busy Dying

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-30

  for some reason "ponced" made me think of a kangaroo.
  
  i like the beginning, it describes Roxy's appearance and makes it easier to picture her.
  
  update soon!

• Get Busy Living Or Get Busy Dying

  (#) siriusly_in_love 2006-11-17

  Hey...loved the fist chapter...but you gotta get better at your spanish (i probably got several mistakes in my english, since I'm 100% mexican...I actually live in mexico....yep yep!! haha)
  Several corrections...
  Lo /S/iento/Disculpeme...
  "Peter was answering one of my questions about my new school, I'm sorry that I was an interruption, it won't happen again"
  (Peter in spanish is actually Pedro, just as a fact..as patric is Patricio...Pato as a nickname, Joe is José and Andrew is Andrés)
  
  Peter estaba contestando una de mis preguntas sobre mi nueva escuela, Disculpe la interrupción, no volverá a pasar
  
  Srry if it annoys you...just making somee corrections... :S

  Author's response

  i like how i now can say FOB members in Spanish now, and thanks for giving me corrections, as i am a bad self-editor (and no hablo espanol, lol). and for all of you that read this response, i used an online translator because i'm lazy. and really bad at spanish (got a B in that class now, omg)

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