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The Frog
(#) Magic144 2007-04-10
That was a REALLY good poem. One thing though, that I would like to mention is that maybe add some punctuation to your poem. Just so that it has pauses for the reader, and add more of an effect that you want to grasp. So anyways, it was a great poem, and I'd love to review more of them!
Magic144:)
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