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It Happens All The Time

Don't talk to strangers.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/03 - Updated: 2006/11/03 - 89 words - Complete

Reviews

• It Happens All The Time

  (#) sasukeluver 2006-11-19 04:38:57 PM

  that was sad. was that for someone speshal? because that was so good. ttyl

  Author's response

  thanks for the review.. you thought it was sad? haha everyone else thought it was creepy. :D

• It Happens All The Time

  (#) Rous 2006-12-01 04:43:48 AM

  Um, personally, I find it humorous. Not in a radically funny way, just humorous.
  
  I do think that some more punctuation would help the reading.
  
  Otherwise, this is a great poem. Do you post at any poetry sites? I can steer you to a great one. If interested, let me know.

  Author's response

  i've posted at poetry.com . But if you know another one i'll be intrested. thanks for the review :D

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