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With my Last Breath [edited]

Theresa is in a world between life and death. Will she be able to survive? will she be able to tell Jay her feelings? Oneshot, J/T. Probably no A/A, sry A/A fans

Category: Class of the Titans - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/06 - Updated: 2011/12/01 - 2046 words - Complete

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• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) hachoo 2006-11-06 01:57:02 AM

  aw man, this is so sad!! but it's so sweet- jay and theresa are so meant to be, even if 1 is dead. good story!

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) Loretta 2006-11-06 06:59:00 AM

  Awesome! That was so sad!

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-11-06 07:55:23 AM

  Nice work, i loved you described the emotion and the world between life and death. Very touching... I never cry when reading stories, only time I've ever cried was during the movie 'Titanic'... WHA! So you should give yourself a pat on the back for tearing at my heartstrings. Nice work. -Nuuoa Eclaire

  Author's response

  i made you cry? no way! i'm so proud of myself..lol, just jk.

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-11-06 12:07:43 PM

  Awwe, that was so sad, but really great! Good job! Keep up the great work!

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) citrus-lime 2006-11-06 01:02:35 PM

  and as they turned around to leave the moneter started to squgel (insert better word) threaseas head turned to them ever so slightly and she barly whisperd im goming back! in other words sequel!

  Author's response

  hm...i think maybe i'll have a sequel

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) Lalalena 2006-11-06 02:52:55 PM

  Beautiful. I loved how Theresa " came to Jay" before she died. And how archie said she wasn't in pain anymore. Great one-shot.

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) Mrs-Jay 2006-11-08 01:02:50 AM

  waaa whys is everyone killing Theresa? :'(
  
  good jobs nice jobs... wipes tears emotional i haveta say

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) PrincessKaytee21 2006-11-11 08:18:01 PM

  she's dead! uh huh oh yeah oh yeah uh huh grabs ipod and starts to dance
  Uh huh oh yeah!

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) lol 2006-11-14 03:19:51 PM

  wow. I almost never cry. I didn't now, but it was VERY sad.

• With my Last Breath [edited]

  (#) Sparky 2007-01-18 03:16:31 PM

  Great story Mrs_Jay it was so sad. but it always makes me laugh when you put that Jayden and Me thing at the start of stories!

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