(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-11-06Nice work, i loved you described the emotion and the world between life and death. Very touching... I never cry when reading stories, only time I've ever cried was during the movie 'Titanic'... WHA! So you should give yourself a pat on the back for tearing at my heartstrings. Nice work. -Nuuoa Eclaire
Author's responsei made you cry? no way! i'm so proud of myself..lol, just jk.
(#) citrus-lime 2006-11-06and as they turned around to leave the moneter started to squgel (insert better word) threaseas head turned to them ever so slightly and she barly whisperd im goming back! in other words sequel!
Author's responsehm...i think maybe i'll have a sequel
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