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Collateral Damage

by patrickdance4me 3 Reviews

Braily is dead. Though she's not sure why, she's still on the earth. Her final wish was she wanted to give back to Pete Wentz what he gave to her. But when she wakes up a ghost in his hotel room to...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance - Characters:  - Chapters: 15 - Published: 2006/11/06 - Updated: 2007/08/12 - 15235 words - Complete

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  • Collateral Damage

    (#) moocow 2006-11-06 04:37:03 PM

    you naughty persoN!
    hahahahah

    Author's response

    u were thinking it 2!
    hehe
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) moocow 2006-11-06 04:48:38 PM

    in your package ehh?
    PERV!
    haha
    what are you doing in my pants?
    oh wait...haha
    i'm so delerious right now.

    Author's response

    aw i wasnt meaning it like that...
    but now that u mention it...
    i now do mean it like that lol.

    evie's been drinking! points finger accusingly

    grins and offers more

    ah the joy of jack daniels and ice cream :)
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) moocow 2006-11-06 04:53:43 PM

    that sounds good.
    your giving me ideas here
    and i've been clean for like 8 months!
    gahh
    hahah

    Author's response

    as long as you're not drinking beer... god that shit tastes sooooooooooo nasty. honestly, they should have laws against that stuff! oh wait, they do. hehe. but if you've been clean for eight months... stop right now! go out and get completely wasted! ah i would if i could but i cant and that sucks. anyone up for sneaking out tonight?
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) PiecesInMe 2006-11-15 06:58:59 PM

    This is so entertaining! And im so happy i have another chapter of this to read!
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) imogen993 2006-11-15 11:53:52 PM

    Oh em gee.
    The bit with the shiveries made me laugh a lot.
    Cheahh.
    And I agree with mymoomoo. It would be cool to be a ghost and go and haunt them. But I would do it to Patrick. 'Cause Patricks cool. =]
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) Kelley Shell 2006-11-17 01:46:34 PM

    Wow, i love this story, its got a really original plot. Keep on writing. As long as youre writing, im reading! Don't you just love PETE?!?!?!?

    Author's response

    yeah, luv him a lot. thanks for reading!
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) kelley_shell09 2006-11-24 11:16:19 AM

    okay, i have to say, this is probably like, one of my favorite fall out boy stories on here...no joke. it's really good and it makes me smile, which is rare. keep up the good work!
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) Natalie 2006-12-24 06:11:41 PM

    Sorry about that. My stupid computer keeps glitching and re sends things sometimes. Bye.
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-25 01:56:17 PM

    Ha, we just read and reviewed each other's stories simultaneously. How terribly intersting for everybody not involved... I am like Joe. (A dork.)
  • Collateral Damage

    (#) PieceInMe 2006-12-25 02:57:12 PM

    Im pretty much on the edge of my seat here. please write more soon!

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