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Tidings

Cloud brings sad tidings to Elmyra.

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Cloud Strife, Elmyra - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/11/07 - Updated: 2006/11/08 - 463 words - Complete

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• Tidings

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-11-07 07:49:02 PM

  This could stand to be fleshed out a bit more. The readers already know what Cloud is going to say. They don't know how Elmyra will react. Try focusing on that.

• Tidings

  (#) Squallfan 2006-11-09 06:58:43 AM

  Personally, I loved it. Short and sweet and to the point. That's not a bad thing! Perfect how it is. I look forward to reading more from you.

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