You know you've got everybody fooled. (was a one shot, but continued)
(#) citrus-lime 2006-11-07 12:04:57 PM
yes!!!! i love! NO T/A!!!! yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!!!
(#) greektitan 2006-11-07 01:18:39 PM
very good...Theresa and Archie!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!Update soon
I'm taking people's advice, and continuing this story. I hope you all still like it!
(#) Ace_Fan_12 2006-11-07 01:38:30 PM
wooow great story!! lol i love that songg!!!!!
(#) jennieman 2006-11-07 04:54:23 PM
that was bloody well awesome. I love how Archie just came right out and said it like that lol. just so him. rather angsty, which i love. keep it up.
(#) hachoo 2006-11-07 09:46:20 PM
that was so cool... i was worried about what theresa would say, but she said no! YAY!!
(#) Hellee 2006-11-07 11:58:05 PM
That was good, very sad and dramatic! loved it well written
(#) darks00 2006-11-08 04:02:24 PM
Wow that was good. Nicely done!
(#) ewbankchristina 2006-11-09 02:53:21 PM
How do you use bold and italics on this site? I've been trying so hard to figure it out! Please help me! I loved this by the way. Very sad at the end..tear Keep writing, this was good!
To use bold and italics, you use the and / sign thingies. Around the world, like this
I know, because it took me an hour to figure it out. Hope this helps!
(#) Caily 2006-11-11 05:28:30 PM
oooh some A/T action! all riiight!!
but i thought the song learics made it kinda corny
I know how corny the lyrics were, but I used them for a good reason. I'm trying to show how strong Theresa's emotions are (as Archie said it, "Drama Queen!")
(#) twiinklestar 2006-12-22 06:52:59 PM
=O ARCHIE AND THERESA! NOOOOO!!! BAD ARCHIE BAD ARCHIE! ITS YOU AND ATLANTA NO YOU AND THERESA! FOOLISH BOY!