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Red Rhapsody

Fred is cheating again, and Angelina decides to pay him a visit. Please r&r

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Angelina Johnson, Fred, George - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2005/07/15 - Updated: 2005/07/16 - 1726 words - Complete

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• Red Rhapsody

  (#) Iceduck 2005-08-02 07:13:53 AM

  I love the time jumping style of this. Very, very effective. The ending's a little bit confusing, and I'm not certain I understand it - were Fred and George together in the bed? Or was George with another girl? Nothing an extra line couldn't fix, though, so very well done.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: No, Fred and George weren't in the bed together. . .sorry I confused you. It was just George, playing one last joke on Angelina. Well, okay, it wasn't really a joke, he was just taking his brother's place. Anyway, thank you much for the courteous review. Honestly, I can't tell you how much I appreciated it!

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